I think if somehow a white male colonist was dropped into our time, he would give us a description of the colonial era that would beat any history textbook. This "living" evidence from the past could give a description about his time and life that would give it an actual "human" feel, not just a bunch of adjectives that mean very little to us.
And what you have here is so vague and general as to be meaningless; you have told the reader nothing specific. You need to do this one again. I warn you: this kind of thoughtless entry does not get credit.
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